[sunshine poem is judged] Sha Hun protects the earth, poetic heart mirrors vast sky -- poetry of Mr Zou Jijun " desert fetch -- send diversiform-leaved poplar " shallow analyse ○ sunshine soft sword
Iron does Qiu branchDefend the earth, chilly beautiful Wei is strong boast as just judge; Resolute firmBattle of pliable but strong 100, Framework of tender feelings steel is proud chiliad. As brushstroke how-to, ford of sunshine postscript hill, pass through the desert with ancient extend, come to the dune of muddy Huang Qifu, walk into the Shi Yuan of double arm of a brandish, bare chest. In the poetry of Mr Zou Jijun, I with very the mood of admire, knew a flock of last names poplar the tree is planted -- of that chiliad luxuriant, it seems that clearly is in eye, branches and leaves is pure and fresh; The form of that chiliad, visit state of odd form different, stare tongue-tied; That chiliad is immortal, it is clank iron bone more, common people exclaim! A near 1000 words 100 poetry, did not mention the name of master first and last, till be read finally, move eye turn one's head, ability is full the aftertaste, firmly remembers a great and tough and loneliness, clinging friend, he calls diversiform-leaved poplar. Meanwhile, poetry " desert fetch -- send diversiform-leaved poplar " also was record in the Shi Juan with China brilliant library together with the name of Mr Zou Jijun. A few days ago, in " Chinese essay net " now and then those who read Mr Zou Jijun is former achieve poetry " desert fetch -- send diversiform-leaved poplar " , be affected by the imposing manner place of stern of that stubborn Wei bank, bold in poetry immediately, the feeling that the sort of fondling admiringly seems to encounter the wine with one long-unseen altar, under stretch, read 3 times, become aware only burn with righteous indignation, happy to dance, taking the first stroke of a Chinese character is lively and vigorous in calligraphy, sai Ruquan emerges. Because, here, although do not have soft continous of spring, without autumnal Feng Yun, but, have the blazing intense emotion of summer however, in the winter strong the United States is extensive. Sober later, to nibble is tasted read, more and more feel poetry imposing manner is like rainbow, artistic conception is multicolored bright; Then ask advice the poet lends content passion chant, of vicissitudes of life of artful analogy life clever. Must strength of high praise poet is abundant, poetic article is broad and profound; The gentleman's your work writes full life enlightenment, the act vigorously that urge a person is entered, sturdy up, be worthy of be current and classic your brilliant work really.
Main content reviews poetry " desert fetch -- send diversiform-leaved poplar " divide in all it is 8, the author does Qiu branch to diversiform-leaved poplar iron early or late, brawny and exuberant, peculiar appearance, the figure with long life undertook sketch; Praise their distinctive in the aloof and proud below the setting sun beauty; Recollected them once joy and brilliant; Described them to go after the brave and tough and clinging, stubborn, dauntless, outstanding character that dedicates with the body; Eulogized they are in hit with sand blown by wind and bitter cold wrestle, hold out the heroic lofty quality that bosom, bathed in blood fights bravely to guard this earth to hold one's head high; Spoke very highly of their chiliad does not fall, inexorable, forever the precious spirit of make a stand against. Imposing manner of canopy of diversiform-leaved poplar lie across, 1000 appearance the form of 100 condition, make the earth plaints, popular feeling shakes! Extensive of poetry imposing manner grand, artistic conception is far-reaching; Word word gem, sentence sentence plaint; Sword bravery heroic spirit, use ground Jing day. Diversiform-leaved poplar is in the hunt hunt elegant demeanour in desert, the valiant heroic posture in cold wind, the to illegally or forcibly occupy desolation cheetah that can say, hold out desert back. The incisively and vividly that the author extols the fetch with desert 3000 amaranthine not only, and countless bookman were written this 100000 " sodden " the bully energy of life that subject matter makes is dazzling, this is not a most welcome, read those who say those who surprise is grandiose make? The outstanding window of poetry
In clarity of train of thought of the author on writing gimmick, taoist priest of calligraphy or drawing, besides step-by-step description, clever narration interposed, become diversiform-leaved poplar "Beautiful distinctive" one large window. After the one's lot that should read diversiform-leaved poplar and characteristic, the author is abrupt calligraphy or drawing is sharp, spoke of harships dialog, relate each old story: "In the whisper with wind, I as if hear you pour out. " I am in that saw in each story in former days good, understood infinite hardships -- " Gu Daoqing of the Western Regions' fragile camel bell, still swaying the joyous noise like your chord. Marry the motorcade of building orchid girl, ever had accepted your affectionate blessing; The Gu Yun of word of Tang poetry the Song Dynasty is rising and falling, the long narrow flag of an ancient type of banner hoisted on a featherdecked mast that ever brandished in you issues romantic westing. " then, the reputation that stressed diversiform-leaved poplar to go after the brave and tough and clinging, stubborn, dauntless, praise that dedicates with the body -- " several chiliad, you are had deep love for and staring this sky, genuine and sturdy. " " you are honest and simple and honest, weave a dream with the smile like gold, kept watch of how many century brilliant. " reading poetry, I am entered slowly psychedelic -- appeared at the moment oasis of prairie of stretch to the horizon -- " the lake water of that oasis grazing and Yang Qun set off, still rippling your green beautiful image " , that brawny diversiform-leaved poplar is like bell of ancient temple copper, let a person hard so big that one can just get one's arms around, resemble chiliad tope forcefully, develop the sky continuously. That brawny old tree root, be filled with grasped Mao Xizhi not as good as, miscellaneous over grown with weeds and stand! They " penetrable your few and far between branches and tendrils and bare sufficient root, resemble a winding and transparent blood-vessel, dash forward run quickly interweave on dune; Also be like the bonfire of redness of skin, at be being ignited before open of curtain of night. " one supports giant army, the station is discharged into beautiful beautiful scenery. In Qing Qinghe the water, ringing camel bell, companionship that receives close motorcade falls, it is in that way auspicious actually, beautiful. Before reading this poetry, I am very little to diversiform-leaved poplar understanding. Accordingly, I just can raise so babyish question, perhaps say, extemporaneous and hair -- " do you know who he is? " : He is the one character with lonely earth, desalt becomes the desert of a lot of unmanned make inquires; He is the gem that God bestows, can with have " plant activation stone " the ginkgo tree that say is rivalled; He is the faithful guard in desert, suffer in countless destroy the hour of indulge in wilful persecution, casting creates mood of desert steel framework iron; He is to use the process that will ponder over life between 3000, those who stay is dignified, bleak is mixed however solemn and stirring, the life that uses oneself and body dotted this wild land, repair the deep Lin Zhixiong of demon. Poetry another window is, encounter unlucky draw to diversiform-leaved poplar, praising diversiform-leaved poplar is such "The firm intense of cruel" . "Do not know when, the stars that shakes off nocturnal garment when you awakes, the sky still is former days is extensive, and Bai Yun is roasted meat this world baked a fragment however. Current disappear escape, yellow Sha Man coils; Yuan Fei of introduced from the northern and western nationalities or from abroad wild goose, group the wolf runs quickly chase. Between heaven and hell, oasis demon unreal becomes the desert; Laky and skinny into the eye socket that dry up, and you also shed last tear. And you also shed last tear.. In fight closely of that red storm, trample, blood stream becomes a river, ai Hong everywhere. Sunshine did not feel so chilly is beautiful, feel the heart is aching only. I grow in Central Plains hinterland, lian Dashan is scarce. There is corn broomcorn over there us, elm and poplar. To this fetch of sanded ground, still do not have how many understanding, fortunately Baidu word can be checked. However to that time, I can have the feeling of body and mind. Read here, sunshine already if the tear heats up a spring -- the countless heroes that I remembered Chinese battlefield suddenly to go up: Huang Jiguang is blocked up grab rather die than submit of blockhouse of eye, Dong Cunrui blast, Liu Hulan... two when I remembered I am experienced personally wars, face fierce and cruel foe, trojan people risking smoke of gunpowder to diffuse, brave assault, bathed in blood fights bravely. A soldier toppled, a flock of officers and soldiers rush forward. Still that develops the flagman in foremost face, although be a mass of bruises, however still procumbent and forward. Although " the austerity of indulge in wilful persecution destroyed your spring dream, the vulture knife of years denuded your appearance. Although you remain Qiu branch only withered work, but you still erect back, the desert below adherence foot. The desert below adherence foot.. Reading this poetry, be unable to bear or endure justice passionate soar, itch to try, in the desert wind that is in to be like a knife by diversiform-leaved poplar brave make a stand against, adamant, free and easy bully gas institute is convinced. Although they go throughall the vicissitudes of life, however still gritty. Positive-appearing image bears down on then the flagman of the upland, when walking along commanding elevation, cold play dozen wore his chest, he with the ordinary person's adv unimaginably perseverance, half on bended knees, china vexillary stand case -- " the banner of eternity of life of your Gao Qing, in striking with the chiliad of sand blown by wind, deducing not immortal persistence and solemn and stirring. " as assault bugle, the enemy does not break through Cheng Jun, cover the head and sneak away like a rat. Gallant flagman, resemble a sculpture, forever caky over -- a person of extraordinary powers, intense, be moved and inspired making a person! Afterwar, those who stay is however a gravestone, one string strings together a name... " you bury dark affection in the root, keep changeless faith in branch. " no less than that one fold a branch to break arm, Xie La's sere diversiform-leaved poplar, form thousand appearance the sculpture of 100 condition group -- the courser that some resembling that gallop, at a tremendous pace; Some resembles piece of move is big lion, howl to the day; Some resembles climbed old person, step forward dimension difficult; Some resembles thin arm hero, raise one's hand opens a season; Some resembling is huge eye, turn up one's nose at canopy... they are exalted and vigrous and screwy limbs, yangtian puts a song, indomitable ground and nature, with argue of life and death. Hoping to yearn for the expression of life then, be unable to bear or endure for diversiform-leaved poplar loudly boost the morale of cries out! The diversiform-leaved poplar of author the wording and purpose of what one writes, why be each animated assault officers and soldiers, earth hero? That shakes, topple the mountains and overturn the seas, lie across thes vault of heaven. The author neighs in the singing that use a poem force exhaust ground is crying out diversiform-leaved poplar is adherence the belief with changeless chiliad, praising the back that holds out a desert. This poetry true it may be saidBeautiful distinctive, the firm intense of cruel, the current chant diversiform-leaved poplar that also says most the life paean with the most beautiful cruel
Send diversiform-leaved poplar, transferred what drive to people Of Mr Zou Jijun achieve poetry formerly " desert fetch -- send diversiform-leaved poplar " after publishing, cause intense echo. A lot of well-known writers, poet stays in succession judge, express deep feeling. Engage by special arrangement reads and edit commment of Yellow River dragon: "Hold content character annals in the palm, eulogize a kind of broad and profound adamancy, to life, have deep enlightenment. " writer Shui Yuntian comments: "Artistic conception is multicolored! Air extensive grand! Your beautiful writing of god-given the content that chant! " poetic Li Zhengping comments: "High-minded annals, pure affection, the condition of figure, stimulate Yang Zhiyu, appropriate Song appropriate is chanted! " young writer Zhu Jiangen comments: "Borrow content chant, passion holds high, artful analogy life, again casting is brilliant. " energy of life of person of true it may be said is rising, reputably again and again. What read an author repeatedly when sunshine is final after two poetry, comprehend the connotation of poetry and enlightenment eventually. "Stand by to you again a few, during taking the advantage of this curtain of night to have not arrive, I want to touch the body like your sculpture more, revere with mine touch Zuo your soul. " the affection that the author cherishs clinking admire, undertook high praise to the high moral character of diversiform-leaved poplar. "100000 with yellow sanded keep sb company, static listen to hurricane howl, flying sand to take rock; Laugh see sunset Xia Fei, Leng Yueheng sky. You are composed be like wisdom person, with castiron character and morals, refine of will alone temper by dipping in water becomes thorn to confused Li Jian. " sunshine thinks, the author indicates the commendable place of diversiform-leaved poplar is: Altruistic and clinging post, pass through to dream spatio-temporally, none crestfallen take on, fearless adamancy, await calmly leisurely, still have the view of person of that blazing hold up. The author is in last paragraphs, push poetry to the height -- " the fetch of amaranthine desert ah, face your firm He Weian, I reflect the back that sees cowardly tail is placed in me, because my heart is wretched and asp, the socket of eye of tear excessive eyeful. Between the new branch tender shoot that I see you spell defend to the last to protect, rise the blaze that removes green; In the cut that your trunk chapped cracks, blossom the smile that gives whiteness, such warmth such self-confidence. " reader these line that affect popular feeling, savour a poet at the moment mood, sunshine need not say more, just felt from the bottom of the heart, oneself and diversiform-leaved poplar photograph are compared, what to feel -- Face him, I am silent not language, because, too much story is in in my heart terrific; Face him, my tear flies like rain, because, long years is in stay imprinting the footstep of hardships vicissitudes of life; Face him, I esteem extremely, because, in my heart he is in that way pure divine; Face him, I am extremely proud, because, he is majestic ensign apply colours to a drawing bright-coloured colour; Face him, my feel too ashamed to show one's face, because, make old experience and him be compared insignificant like sand; Face him, I am infinite be roused to action, because, his existence makes me energized, high-spirited ongoing footstep. What is the great mind of the diversiform-leaved poplar of author the wording and purpose of what one writes --Be "Chiliad is not dead, chiliad does not fall, chiliad is immortal" clank iron bone; Be those who be born is strong beautiful, vivid adamancy, the solemn and stirring exalted soul that fall; It is the heroic character and morals that powerful vitality, tenacious adaptability and tough and forceful be in harmony are an organic whole. The poet uses sturdy vision, the brush stroke in Chinese painting and calligraphy of bold, bold and unrestrained passion, dig artistic conception elaboratively, greatly -- how-to the blue sky that we fly to to Gao Yuan, fly to desert forest, fly to the position that diversiform-leaved poplar stands fast, between the heart that the fetch that flies to desert beats silently, the spirit that goes comprehending diversiform-leaved poplar not to fall personally --Guide usCherish have, take root is deep wide; ForeverIncentive our heroism is tenacious, Do all one can takes on; Lash we challenge affliction, Hard up; Bestow weThe courage of conquer destiny and force; Hope we want to live Zheng of bones and muscles is forcedly, want to get stern bold and unconstrained alive! Iron bone clanks chiliad is held out, tough strong beautiful all ages is male. Reciting poetry, praising diversiform-leaved poplar, feel an upsurge of emotion, high-spirited and vigorous, proud to share poetry, to know diversiform-leaved poplar pride -- the back that you are the earth, silvan Great Wall, the beefeater of the desert, desert soul. You once had childlike green time, the battlefield of bathed in blood of cruelty of classics of your Ceng Li, one batch your approved a comrade-in-arms to sacrifice, but however neither one is flat, they go up in desert resolutely stand, hold out a bosom to turn up one's nose at vast sky. Your boldness of vision is just as Jiang He to growl, your call out is just as a situation full of danger, your feat likes a brave and strong person that inserts a banner, "The thought raising of things to a higher level that bringing me flies upwards, mixing afterglow of the flaming in dewfall together, enlightened the sky of big desert bleak. " although blood is dried, but the red flag does not fall forever. True it may be said: Sanded soul touchs the earth, vast sky of boast of Shi Zhixin illumination. [adscript]January 25 days, mr Zou Jijun says in small letter: In October 2017, go Xinjiang is away on official business, take visiting diversiform-leaved poplar with Tian He with the good friend together, was shaken deeply at that time, after coming back, used only time of two days is written down " desert fetch -- send diversiform-leaved poplar " . After sunshine is read, stand feeling this is the work with a very high quality, take out the edge between 3 climate to learn an edge to write, finish the after reading feeling of 4000 more than word eventually at 30 days. As a result of sunshine have little talent and learning, add poetic poem work to pledge extremely tall, the feeling that sunshine concealed controls hard now. But, because love,come extremely, sunshine acts on study to ask for advice, those who learn from others's strong points to offset one's weakness is sincere, make bold show oneself up, still hope friend of each everybody poem criticizes point out mistakes so that they can be corrected. (Zhu Huabing at 2018.01.30. Write at Qingdao) [writer brief introduction]Zhu Huabing, pseudonym: Sunshine soft sword, native place: A surname city, party member of the Communist Party of China, shandong writer, army turn poet, literary books publisher, have the honor to win the first twice, the 3rd " China affection " special honour of gold prize of league matches of countrywide poetry essay. 1984 " person Merit Citation of thrust deep into the enemy forces of the Yinshan Mountains official battalion " one of commanders. It is vice-chairman of association of writer of youth of He lustre city now, "China essay net " creation committee vice-chairman, "China essay net " engage by special arrangement reads and edit, chinese poetry academician; CCTV " gules impress " a series of books of culture project series is made up appoint can standing director holds chief editor concurrently, " poetic China magazine " chief editor. |
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